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F I D O
29th November 2006, 02:42 PM
Let us collect maestro's best work at FZ.I hope sabhi contribute karenge.

# mujhko yakin hai such kahti thi jo bhi ammi kahti thin,

jab mere bachpan ke din the chand me pariyan rahti thin.

ek ye din jab apno ne bhi hum se nata tod liya,

ek wo din jab ped ki shaakhen bojh humara sahti thi.

ek ye din jab sari sadken roothi-roothi lagti hain,

ek wo din jab aao khelen sari galiyan kahti thi.

ek ye din jab jaagi raten deevaron ko takti hain,

ek wo din jab shamon ki bhi palken bojhil rahti thi.

ek ye din jab lakhon gum or akal pada hai aansoo ka,

ek wo din jab ek jara si bat pe nadiyan bahti thi.

(javed akhtar)

F I D O
29th November 2006, 03:15 PM
koi response nahi,chalo mein hi unki ek aur ghazal pesh karta hun

#dukh ke jangal main firte hain kab se mare mare log
jo hota hai sah lete hain kaise hain bechare log

jeevan-jeevan humne jag main khel yahi hote dekha
dhire-dhire jiitii duniya dhire-dhire hare log

wqt sinhasan par baitha hai apne rag sunata hai
sangat dene ko pate hain sanson ke iktare log

neki ik din kam aati hai humko kya samjhate ho
humne bebas marte dekhe kaise pyare-pyare log

is nagri main kyon milti hai roti sapnon ke badle
jinki nagri hai vo jane hum thahre banjare log

(javed akhtar)

leleram
29th November 2006, 04:20 PM
NICE START FIDO:thumbup:....HERE IS ONE MORE FROM THE MAESTRO...

vo dhal raha hai to ye bhi rangat badal rahi hai
zameen suraj ki ungliyon se fisal rahi hai
jo mujhe zinda jalaa rahe hain vo bekhabar hain
ki meri zanjeer dhire-dhire pighal rahi hai
main katl to ho gaya tumahri gali men lekin
mire lahoo se tumahri deevar gal rahi hai
n jalne paate the jiske choolhe bhi har savere
suna hai kal rat se vo basti bhi jal rahi hai

F I D O
29th November 2006, 06:29 PM
:001_rolleyes: Thanks lele.I hope like u other senior members will also contribute.
One more by the master

hum dono jo harf they
hum ik roz mile
ik lafz banaa
aur hamne ik maane paaye
fir jaane kya hum par guzari
our ab youn hai tum ik harf ho ik khaane mein
main ik harf hoon ik khaane mein
beech mein kitne lamhon ke khaane khaali hain
fir se koi lafz bane
aur ham dono ik maane paayein
aisaa ho saktaa hai,lekin
sochanaa hogaa
in khaano mein hamko bharnaa kyaa hai

jhoomroo
29th November 2006, 08:24 PM
sabhi gazle'n achi hai...

Jupiter
30th November 2006, 12:32 PM
Let us collect maestro's best work at FZ.I hope sabhi contribute karenge.

# mujhko yakin hai such kahti thi jo bhi ammi kahti thin,

jab mere bachpan ke din the chand me pariyan rahti thin.

ek ye din jab apno ne bhi hum se nata tod liya,

ek wo din jab ped ki shaakhen bojh humara sahti thi.

ek ye din jab sari sadken roothi-roothi lagti hain,

ek wo din jab aao khelen sari galiyan kahti thi.

ek ye din jab jaagi raten deevaron ko takti hain,

ek wo din jab shamon ki bhi palken bojhil rahti thi.

ek ye din jab lakhon gum or akal pada hai aansoo ka,

ek wo din jab ek jara si bat pe nadiyan bahti thi.

(javed akhtar)

Hey Fido

Posting the ghazal with some corrections and added shers

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Jupiter
30th November 2006, 12:38 PM
And how can we forget this 1

Tumko dekha to ye khayaal aaya
Zindgi dhoop tum ghana saaya

Aaj phir dil ne ek tamanna ki
Aaj phir dil ko humane samajhaya

Tum chale jaaoge to sochenge
Humne kya khoya, humne kya paaya

Hum jise gunaguna nahin sakte
Waqt ne aisa geet kyu'n gaaya

F I D O
30th November 2006, 12:43 PM
Jupi bhai shukriya aapka i hope ke aapki tarah baki senior members bhi Javed sahib ke anmol khazane ko FZ par ikatha karne mein madad karenge.Keep posting.....

#shaam hone ko hai
laal sooraj samandar mein khone ko hai
aur uske paar kuchh parinde qataarein banaaye
unhi jangalon ko chale jinke pedon ki shaakhon pe hain ghonsle
ye parinde vahin laut kar jaayenge aur so jaayenge
ham hi hairaan hain
is makaano ke jangal mein
apna kahin bhi thikaana nahin
shaam hone ko hai
ham kahaan jaayenge

Jupiter
30th November 2006, 12:47 PM
I Love this 1 from SOZ

Aaj Maine Aapna Phir Sauda Kiya,
Aur Phir Mein Dur Se Dekha Kiya,
Zindagi Bhar Mere Kam Aaye Asul,
Ek Ek Karke Unhe Becha Kiya
Kuch Kami Apni Wafao Me Bhi Thi,
Tumse Kya Kahte Ki Tumne Kya Kiya,
Ho Gayi Thi Dil Ko Kuch Umeed Si,
Khair Tumne Jo Kiya Aacha Kiya

Jupiter
30th November 2006, 12:54 PM
A wonderful Nazm from Silsilay



Main Bhool Jaaoon Tumhe, Ab Yahi Munaasib Hai
Magar Bhoolna Bhi Chaahoon To Kis Tarah Bhooloon
Ke Tum To Fir Bhi Haqikat Ho Koi Khwaab Nahin
Yahan To Dil Ka Ye Aalam Hai Kyaa Kahoon 'kambakht'
Bhula Saka Na Ye Wo Silsila Jo Thaa Hi Nahin
Wo Ik Khyaal Jo Awaaz Tak Gaya Hi Nahin
Wo Ek Baat Jo Main Keh Nahin Saka Tumse
Wo Ek Rawt Jo Hum Mein Kabhi Raha Hi Nahin
Mujhe Hai Yaad Wo Sab Jo Kabhi Huwa Hi Nahin
Agar Ye Haal Hai Dil Ka To Koi Samjhaaye
Tumhe Bhulaana Bhi Chaahoon To Kis Tarah Bhooloon
Ke Tum To Fir Bhi Hakikat Ho Koi Khwaab Nahin

F I D O
30th November 2006, 12:54 PM
Kuch Kami Apni Wafao Me Bhi Thi,
Tumse Kya Kahte Ki Tumne Kya Kiya,
Ho Gayi Thi Dil Ko Kuch Umeed Si,
Khair Tumne Jo Kiya Aacha Kiya


kya baat hai,:adore: :adore: aise laga kisi ne mere dil ki baat hi keh di.....jupi bhai mazaa aagaya.....kuch aisa hi ek aur ho jaye...plz.

jhoomroo
30th November 2006, 01:55 PM
:) mehfil saja dee aap dono'n ne,maza aa araha hai... aur bhi shayer hain,unke kalam ko bhi yaad kijiye...

F I D O
30th November 2006, 02:18 PM
jhoomro janab aap ke yogdaan ka bhi intezar rahega.....lijiye hum apna farz poora kiye dete hain

# misaal iski kahaan hai zamaane mein
ki saare khone ke Gam paaye hamne paane mein
vo shakl pighli to har shai mein Dhal gai jaise
ajeeb baat hui hai use bhulaane mein
jo muntazir na milaa vo to ham hai sharmindaa
ki hamane der lagaa di palat ke aane mein
latiif tha vo takhaiyyul se,khvaab se naazuk
gavaa diyaa hamane hi use aazmaane mein
samajh liya tha kabhi ek saraab ko dariyaa
par ek sukun tha humko fareb khaane mein
jhuka darakht havaa se, to aandhiyon ne kaha
ziyaadaa farq nahi jhuk ke toot jaane mein

(javed akhtar)

jhoomroo
30th November 2006, 02:33 PM
bohot khoobsurat gazal post kee...share kerne ka shukriya...

greatalok
30th November 2006, 03:02 PM
He once wrote on urbanization:

Oonchi imaraton se makaan mera ghir gaya,
Kuch log mere hisse ka suraj bhi kha gaye

Jupiter
30th November 2006, 03:24 PM
Log by Javed Akhtar

Dukh ke jangal men phirte hain kab se maare maare log
Jo hotaa hai sah lete hain kaise hain bechare log
Jeevan jeevan hum ne jag me'n khel yahi hote dekha
Dheere dheere jeeti duniya dheere dheere hare log
Sangat dene ko paate hain saanson ke ik-tare log
Is nagari me'n kyon milti hai roti sapno'n ke badle
Jinki nagari hai vo jaane, hum Thahare banjare log

Jupiter
30th November 2006, 03:27 PM
Wo Kamra Yaad Aata Hai


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Jupiter
30th November 2006, 03:28 PM
Mera Aangan, Mera Ped

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Jupiter
30th November 2006, 03:33 PM
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Jupiter
30th November 2006, 03:38 PM
Two of my favourite Nazms

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Jupiter
30th November 2006, 03:41 PM
Banjaara - NAzm

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Jupiter
30th November 2006, 03:43 PM
Bhookh - NAzm

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Jupiter
30th November 2006, 03:45 PM
4 Qtaye

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Jupiter
30th November 2006, 03:47 PM
Bachpan

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Jupiter
30th November 2006, 03:49 PM
Jism

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F I D O
30th November 2006, 04:03 PM
:thumbup: :thumbup: WAH jupi mazaa aagaya.lijiye meri taraf se bhi Javed sahib ke chand Sher...

#gin gin ke sikke haath mera khurdaraa hua
jaatee rahee vo lams ki narmi,bura hua

#oonchee imaarton se makaan meraa ghir gaya
kuchh log mere hisse ka sooraj bhee khaa gaye

#hamko uthnaa to munh andhere tha
lekin ik khwaab hamko ghere tha

#sab ki khushi ka faaslaa ek kadam hai
har ghar mein bas ek hi kamraa kam hai

#apni vajah-e-barbaadi suniye to maze ki hai
zindagi se youn khele jaise doosare ki hai

#iss shahar mein jeene ke andaaz niraale hain
hothon pe lateefe hain aavaaz mein chhaale hain.

(javed akhtar)

jhoomroo
30th November 2006, 04:06 PM
Jism

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yeh gazal nusrat sahab ne gai hai,gazal me lafzon ko is tarha piroya hai, jaise mala me moti...iss gazal ka andaz, lajawab hai...

F I D O
30th November 2006, 04:12 PM
kya baat hai.....agar kahin iska koi audio link bhi dede jhoomroo bhai to nusrat sahib or javed ji ki jugalbandi ka lutf mein bhi utha lo...

jhoomroo
30th November 2006, 04:16 PM
kuch meri pasand ki gazal pesh hai...

ab ager aao to janeke liye matt aana,
sirf ehsaan jatane kiye matt aana...

maine palok'n pe tamannaye'n saja rakhi hai,
dilme ummidki sau shamme jala rakhi hai,
yeh haseen shamme bujhane ke liye matt aana,
ab ager aao to janeke liye matt aana...

pyarki aagme zanjire'n pighal sakti hai,
chahnewalo'n ki taqdeere'n badal sakti hai,
tum ho bebas yeh bataneke liye matt aana,
ab ager aao to , janeke liye matt aana...

ab tum aana, jo tumhe mujhse mohobbat hai koi,
mujhse milneki ager tumko bhi chahat hai koi,
tum koi rasm nibahne ke liye matt aana,
ab ager aao to janeke liye matt aana,
sirf ehsaan jatane ki liye matt aana....

jhoomroo
30th November 2006, 04:25 PM
tamanna phir machal jaye ager tum milna aa jao,
yeh mausam bhi badal jaye,ager tum milne aa jao...

mujhe gamm hai ki maine zindagi me kuch nahi paya,
yeh gamm dilse nikal jaye, ager tum milne aa jao...

yeh duniyabherke jhagde, gharke kisse,kaam ki batyen,
baalaa her ek tal jaye ager tum milne aa jao....

nahi milte ho mujhse tum to sab humdard hai mere,
zamana mujhse jaal jaye ager tum milne aa jao...

F I D O
30th November 2006, 04:25 PM
pyarki aagme zanjire'n pighal sakti hai,
chahnewalo'n ki taqdeere'n badal sakti hai,
tum ho bebas yeh bataneke liye matt aana

WAH......kisini kuch aisa likha hai jara gor farmaiye....
"Bebasii jurm hai hauslaa jurm hai
zindagi teri ik-ik adaa jurm hai
aye sanam tere baare mein kuch sochkar
apne baare mein kuch sochna jurm hai
yaad rakhna tujhe mera ek jurm tha
bhool jana tujhe doosra jurm hai
kya sitam hai ke tere hasin shehar mein
har taraf gaur se dekhna jurm hai"

jhoomroo
30th November 2006, 04:31 PM
yeh gazal mujhe jyada pasand hai,

aap bhi aaiye humko bhi boolate rahiye,
dosti jurm nahi,dost banate rahiye...

zeher pi jaiye aur bantiye amrit sabko,
zakhm bhi khaiye, aur geet bhi gate rahiye...

woqtne loot lee logo'n ki tamannaye'n bhi,
khwab jo dekhiye, auro'n ko dikhate rahiye...

shaql to aapke bhi zehen me hogi koi,
kabhi ban jayegi, tasveer banate rahiye...

jhoomroo
30th November 2006, 04:44 PM
fido,mujhe yaad nahi,aap "sangam" ya "aafreen" me dekh lijiye...

leleram
30th November 2006, 06:52 PM
Nice thread:thumbup: One more Nazm By Javed saab.......


hamaare shouq kee ye intahaa thi
qadam rakhaa ki manzil raastaa thi

bichhar ke daar se ban-ban firaa
hiran ko apni kastoori sazaa thi

kabhi jo khwaab tha paa liyaa hai
magar jo kho gayi vo cheez kyaa thi


main bachapan mein khilone tortaa tha
mere anzaam ki vo ibtadaa thi

mohabbat mar gayi mujhko bhi gham hai
mere achhe dino ke aashnaa thi
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F I D O
1st December 2006, 10:41 PM
bichhar ke daar se ban-ban firaa
hiran ko apni kastoori sazaa thi

kabhi jo khwaab tha paa liyaa hai
magar jo kho gayi vo cheez kyaa thi


main bachapan mein khilone tortaa tha
mere anzaam ki vo ibtadaa thi

mohabbat mar gayi mujhko bhi gham hai
mere achhe dino ke aashnaa thi
__________________
wah-wah jio lele bhai kya baat hai
yeh meri taraf se umeed hai sabko pasand aayega


#kyun zindagi ki raah mein majaboor ho gaye
itne hue kareeb ke hum door ho gaye


aisa nahin ke humko koi bhi khushi nahin
lekin ye zindagi to koi zindagi nahin
kyon iske faisale hamein manzoor ho gaye


paayaa tumhein to humko lagaa tumko kho diyaa
ham dil pe roye aur ye dil ham pe ro diyaa
palakon se Khwaab kyon gire kyon choor ho gaye

kyun zindagi ki raah mein majaboor ho gaye......



(javed akhtar)


keep posting still lot to collect....kyunki is raaste ki manzil abhi door hai yaaro

leleram
2nd December 2006, 02:12 PM
wah-wah jio lele bhai kya baat hai
yeh meri taraf se umeed hai sabko pasand aayega


#kyun zindagi ki raah mein majaboor ho gaye
itne hue kareeb ke hum door ho gaye


aisa nahin ke humko koi bhi khushi nahin
lekin ye zindagi to koi zindagi nahin
kyon iske faisale hamein manzoor ho gaye


paayaa tumhein to humko lagaa tumko kho diyaa
ham dil pe roye aur ye dil ham pe ro diyaa
palakon se Khwaab kyon gire kyon choor ho gaye

kyun zindagi ki raah mein majaboor ho gaye......



(javed akhtar)


keep posting still lot to collect....kyunki is raaste ki manzil abhi door hai yaaro
:BAHUT KHUB:clap::clap::clap:

jhoomroo
2nd December 2006, 05:30 PM
sangam album se nusrat sahab ka gaya, javed sahabka kalaam,yeh wakai kallam aur aawaz ka bohot khoosurat sangam hai...mujhe shaq hai yeh kisiko pasand aayega, isliye maine isse post nahi kiya tha...

phirte hain kabse dar-b-dar, ab is nager ,ab uss nager,
ek dusreke ke humsafer, mai aur meri aawargi...
na aashna her rahguzar,na meherbaan hai ek nazar,
jaye'n to jaye'n kidhar, mai aur meri aawargi...mai aur meri awargi...

hum bhi kabhi aabad thye, aise kahan barbaad thye,
befiqr thye aazad thye,masroor thye dilshad thye,
woh chal aisi chal gaya,hum bujh gaye dil jal gaya,
nikale jalake apna ghar, mai aur meri aawargi...mai aur meri aawargi...

woh mah-e-wash, woh mah-e-rooh,woh mah-e- kamil, hoobahoo,
thee jiski batye'n, koobkoo,uss se ajab thee guftgoo,
phir yun hua, woh kho gai,aur mujhko zidsi ho gai,
layenge unko dhoondker, mai aur meri aawargi... mai aur meri aawargi...

yeh dil hi tha jo seh gaya,woh baat aisi keh gaya,
kehene ko phir kya reh gaya,ashqo'n ka darya beh gaya,
jub kehker woh dilwer gaya,tere liye mai marr gaya,
rote hain usko raat bher, mai aur meri aawargi... mai aur meri aawargi...

ab gamm uthaye kisliye,yeh dil jalaye kisliye,
aansoo bahaye kisliye,yun jaan gawaye'n kisliye,
pesha na ho jiska sitam,dhoodenge ab aisa sanam,
honge kahin to karager, mai aur meri aawargi... mai aur meri aawargi...

asraar hai sab khotke,imkan hai sab chotke,
ghar bandh hai sab kotke,ab khatm hai sab totke,
kismat ka sab yeh pher hai,andher hi andher hai,
aise huye hai be asar, mai aur meri aawargi... mai aur meri aawargi...

jub humdam-o-humraz tha,tab aur hi andaz tha,
ab soz hai tab saaz tha,ab sharm hai tab naaz tha,
ab mujhse ho to ho bhi kya,hai sath woh to woh bhi kya,
ek behooner, be asar, mai aur meri aawargi...mai aur meri aawargi...

jhoomroo
2nd December 2006, 06:29 PM
yeh gazal maine pehele post kee hai(jo kisiko pasand nahi aai,siwa jupiter ke)iss ki yeh sahi jagah hai, shayad ab koi padhe...

sheherke dookandaro karobaro ulfatme ,
sood kya bina kya hai, tum na jaan paoge,
dilke damm kitne hai,har kitne mehenge hai,
aur naqde jaa'n kya hai, tum na jan paoge...

koi kaise milta hai,phool kaise khilta hai,
aankh kaise jhookti hai, sans kaise rookti hai,
kaise reh nikalti hai, kaise baat chalti hai,
shauqki zubaa'n kya hai, tumna jan paoge...

vaslka sukoo'n kya hai,hijrka junoo'n kya hai,
husnka kusoor kya hai,ishq pe garoor kya hai,
tum mariz-e-danai, maslahat ke sheidai,
rahe goom rawa kya hai, tum na jan paoge...

zakhm kaise phalte hai'n, dag kaise jalte hai'n,
dard kaise hota hai,koi kaise rota hai,
ashq kya hai nale kya, dasht kya hai chhale kya,
aah ka gunah kya hai, tumna jan paoge...

janta hoon mai tumko zauq-e-shayeri bhi hai,
shakhsiyat khajaneme ek yeh maheri bhi hai,
phir bhi herf choonte ho,sirf lafz boonte ho,
inke darmiya'n kya hai tum na janpaoge....

jhoomroo
7th December 2006, 03:21 PM
yahi halaat ibtadaase rahe,
log humse khafa khafase rahe...

bewafa tum kabhi na rahe lekin,
yeh bhi sach hai ki bewafase rahe...

in chirago'n me tel hi kamm tha,
kyon gilla phir hume hawase rahe...

behes, shatranj, musiqee,
tum nahi rahe to,yeh dilase rahe...

uss ke bando'n ko dekh ker kahiye,
humko ummid kya khudase rahe...

zindagiki sharab mangte ho?
humko dekho, ki pi ke pyase rahe...

funnyfaridabadi
7th December 2006, 03:55 PM
excellent post

Jupiter
7th December 2006, 05:09 PM
Jhumroo has already posted this 1

Reposting in Hindi, along with the meanings of tough words


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jhoomroo
8th December 2006, 04:16 PM
fido ne "aawargi","mai aur meri aawargee" aur ek gazal post kee thee,woh delete kee gaee?mai aur meri aawargee is thread me hai, aawargee ko iss thread me shamil kerna chahiye...meri request hai,uss post ke reply ka ya iss replyka koi galat matlaab na nikala jaye...ummid hai aawargee ko is thread me shameel karenge...

jhoomroo
8th December 2006, 04:53 PM
aafreen ke bagair yeh thread adhura reh jayega...

husn-e-jaana ki tareef mumkin nahi,
aafreen, aafreen, aafreen, aafreen,
tujhe dekhe ager to kahe humnasheen,
aafreen, aafreen, aafreen, aafreen, aafreen...

aisa dekha nahi khoobsurat koi,
jism jaise ajantaki moorat koi,
jism jaise nigaho'n pe jadoo koi,
jism nagma koi, jism khooshboo koi,
jism jaise machlati huee raagni,
jism jaise mehekti huee chandani,
jism jaisa ki khilta hua ek chamaan,
jism jaise ki surajki peheli kiran,
jism tarasha hua dilkush-o-dilnasheen,
sandali, sandali, marmaree, marmaree,
aafreen, aafreen, aafreen, aafreen...

husn_e-janaki tareef mumkin nahi...

chehra ek phoolki tarha shadab hai,
chehra uska hai ya koi mehtaab hai,
chehra jaise gazal, chehra jaan-e-gazal,
chehra jaise kali,chehra jaise kanwal,
chehra jaise tasvvoor bhi tasveer bhi,
chehra jaise alif lailaki dasta'n,
chehra ek pal yakeen, chehra ek pal gumma'n,
chehra jaise ki chehra kahi'n bhi nahi,
maahroo, maahroo,mehjubee'n mehjubee'n,
aafreen, aafreen, aafreen,aafreen.

husn-e-jaana ki tareef mumkeen nahi...

aankhen dekhi to mai dekhta hi raha,
jaam do aur dono hi do aatisha'n,
aankhe ya maiqadeke yeh do baab hai,
aankhen inko kahoo'n ya kahoo'n khwab hai,
aankhe nichi huee to haya bun gaee,
aankhe unchi huee to dua bun gaee,
aankhe uthker jhooki to adaa bun gai,
aankhe jhook ker uthee to qaza bun gai,
nergisi, nergisi,soormai, soormai,
aafreen,aafreen,aafreen,aafreen...

husn-e-jaana ki tareef mumkeek nahi...

zulf jaana ki bhi hai lumbi dasta'n,
zulf ki mere dilpe hai parchhaiyaa'n,
zulf jaise ki umdee huee ho ghata,
zulf jaise ki ho koi kali bala,
zulf uljhye to duniya pareshan ho,
zulf sooljhye to zeest aasan ho,
zulf bikhre to siyah raat chhane lage,
zulf leheraye to raat jane lage,
zulf zanjeer hai phir bhi kitni haseen,
reshmee, reshmee, ambree, ambree,
aafreen,aafreen, aafreen, aafreen...

husn-e-jaanaki tareef mukeen nahi,
aafreen,aafreen,aafreen,aafreen....
tu bhi dekhe ager to kahe humnasheen,
aafreen,aafreen,aafreen,aafreen....

F I D O
9th December 2006, 04:13 PM
fido ne "aawargi","mai aur meri aawargee" aur ek gazal post kee thee,woh delete kee gaee?mai aur meri aawargee is thread me hai, aawargee ko iss thread me shamil kerna chahiye...meri request hai,uss post ke reply ka ya iss replyka koi galat matlaab na nikala jaye...ummid hai aawargee ko is thread me shameel karenge...

sir kuch confusion lagti hai aapko......"aawargi" is thread mein nahi "Aap ki pasandida ghazal" thread mein hai....kuch aur achi ghazal bhi aapki khidmat mein pesh ki hain umeed hai pasand aayegi..... :thumbup:

jhoomroo
10th December 2006, 06:09 PM
durust farmaya...galti ho gai...mujhe kalaam kiska hai aqser yaad nahi reheta... leleram ka reply humesha yaad rahega...pata hai, yaad dilaneper babal ya bawal khada hoga...aur bawalon ko jhelna mujhe katai pasand nahi...

F I D O
13th December 2006, 04:58 PM
Jupi aur Jhoomro aapka bahut-2 shukriya.. Javed Sahib ka jo anmol khazana aap log yahan ikathaa kar rahe hai.....

ye bataa de mujhe zindagi
pyaar ki raah ke humasafar
kis tarah ban gaye ajnabi
ye bataa de mujhe zindagi
phool kyun saare murjhaa gaye
kis liye bujh gai chandani
ye bataa de mujhe zindagi


kal jo baahon mein thi
aur nigaahon mein thi
ab vo garmii kahan kho gai
na vo andaaz hai
na vo aavaaz hai
ab vo narmii kahan kho gai
ye bataa de mujhe zindagii


bevafaa tum nahi
bevafaa ham nahi
phir vo jazbaat kyon so gaye
pyaar tum ko bhii hai
pyaar hum ko bhii hai
faasale phir ye kyaa ho gaye
ye bataa de mujhe zindagii


(javed akhtar)

jhoomroo
13th December 2006, 06:20 PM
yeh gazal mujhe pasand hai,hakeeqat yeh hai ki jo kalaam jagjit, pankaj jaise singer's ne gaya, usse saraha gaya...

F I D O
13th December 2006, 06:45 PM
jhoomroo yeh lijiye

main aur merii aawaragii

phirate hain kab se dar_ba_dar ab is nagar ab us nagar
ek doosare ke hamsafar main aur merii aawaragii
naa aashnaa har rah_guzar naa meharbaan hai ek nazar
jaayen to ab jaayen kidhar main aur meri aawaragii

ham bhii kabhii aabaad the aise kahaan bar_baad the
befikr the aazaad the masarur the dil_shaad the
vo chaal aisi chal gayaa ham bujh gaye dil jal gayaa
nikle jalaa ke apnaa ghar ma.n aur merii aawaragii

vo maah-e-vash vo maah-e-ruuh vo maah-e-kaamil huu_ba_huu
thi jis kii baatein kuu_ba_kuu us se ajab thii guftagu
phir yuun huaa vo kho gaii aur mujh ko zid sii ho gaii
laayenge us ko DhuND kar main aur merii aawaragii

ye dil hii thaa jo sah gayaa vo baat aisii kah gayaa
kahane ko phir kyaa rah gayaa ashkon kaa dariyaa bah gayaa
jab kah kar vo dilbar gayaa tee liye main mar gayaa
rote hain us ko raat bhar main aur merii aawaragii

ab Gam uthaayen kis liye ye dil jalaayen kis liye
aansu bahaayen kis liye yun jaan gavaayen kis liye
peshaa na ho jis kaa sitam dhundenge ab aisa sanam
honge kahin to kaargar main aur merii aawaragii

aasaar hain sab khot ke imkaan hain sab chot ke
ghar band hain sab kot ke ab Khatm hai sab ToTake.
kismat kaa sab ye khel hai andher hii andher hai
aise hue hain beasar main aur merii aawaragii

jab ham_dam -o- ham_raaz thaa tab aur hii andaaz thaa
ab soz hai tab saaz thaa ab sharm hai tab naaz thaa
ab mujh se ho to ho bhii kyaa hai saath vo to vo bhii kyaa
ek behunar ek besabar main aur merii aawaragii

(javed akhtar)

jhoomroo
14th December 2006, 04:16 PM
:( phir repeat kee?????????? aap apne hi thread me nahi dekhte kisne kya post kiya hai...

yeh gazal tehzeeb movie se hai, a r rehman ka music,sujata bhattacharya ki aawaz...shayad aap ko pasand aaye...

sabak aisa padha diya tune,
dilse sab kuch bhoola diya tune,
lakh deneka, ek dena hai
dil-e-bemaut diya tune...

dee talab, jhoomna mile mujhko,
dee garaz, jo diya, diya tune...

kahi'n mushtaqse hijab hua,
kahin parda utha diya tune,
mit gaye dilse, naksh-e- qateel sab,
naksha apna jama diya tune...

mujh gunehgar ko jo bakhsh diya,
to jahannum ko kya diya?
dag ko kaun denewala tha,
jo diya, ai khuda diya tune...

F I D O
22nd December 2006, 05:24 PM
......pyaar mujhse jo kiyaa tumane to kyaa paaogii
mere haalat kii aandhii mein bikhar jaogii


ranj aur dard kii bastii ka main baashindaa hun
ye to bas main hun ke is haal mein bhii zindaa hun
khvaab kyun dekhun vo kal jisape main sharmindaa hun
main jo sharmindaa huaa tum bhii to sharamaaogii


kyun mere saath koi aur pareshaan rahe
merii duniyaa hai jo vIraan to vIraan rahe
zindagii ka ye safar tumko to aasaan rahe
humasafar mujhko banaogii to pachtaaogii


ek main kyaa abhii aayenge deewane kitane
abhii gunjege mohabat ke taraane kitane
zindagii tumko sunaayegii fasaane kitane
kyun samajhtii ho mujhe bhool nahii paaogii

(Javed Akhtar)

jhoomroo
5th March 2007, 03:56 PM
sare sapne kahin kho gaye,
hai!hum kya se kya ho gaye...

dilse tanhai ka dard jeeta,
kya kahe'n hum pe kya, kya bita,
tum na aaye mager jo gaye , hai!hum kya kya ho gaye...

tumne humse kahi thee jo baty'n,
unko dohrati hain gamm ki ratye'n,
tumse milne ke din to gaye , hai!hum kya se kya hogaye...

koi shikwa na koi gilla hai,
tumse kab hum ko yeh gamm mila hai,
haan, naseeb apne hi so gaye , hai !hum kya se kya ho gaye...

funnyfaridabadi
5th March 2007, 04:08 PM
very well jhoomroo

jhoomroo
5th March 2007, 04:15 PM
shukriya f f...

F I D O
5th March 2007, 04:19 PM
one of my all time favourites....javed sahab ne ek yuva ke mann ki baat bahut khoobsoorati se byaan ki hai......umeed hai aap sab pasand karenge
S.P.Balasubramaniyam ki aawaz ne isse char-chand lagaye hain......


Hum na samjhe the
baat itni si
khaab sheeshe ke
duniya pathhar ki.....

Aarzoo humne ki to hum paae
Aarzoo humne ki to hum paae
roshni saath laai thi saaye
saaye gehre the
roshni halki

hum na samjhe the baat itni si......


Sirf veeranee sirf tanhayee
sirf veeranee sirf tanhayee
zindahi humko ye kahan laayee?
kho gayi humse raah manzil ki

Hum na samjhe the baat itni si.....


kya koi beche kya koi baante
kya koi beche kya koi baante
apne daaman mein sirf hain kaante
aur dukanein hain sirf phoolon ki

Hum na samjhe the baat itni si.....


Hum na samjhe the
baat itni si
khaab sheeshe ke
duniya patthar ki

Hum na samjhe the baat itni si........

funnyfaridabadi
5th March 2007, 04:23 PM
:hi_5: fido

Jupiter
5th March 2007, 04:26 PM
that 1s a real nice one FIDO

jhoomroo
5th March 2007, 04:55 PM
kaise bataun mai tumhe,
mere liye tum kaun ho,kaise bataun?
kaise bataun mai tumhe...

tum dhadkan ka geet ho,jeevan ka tum sangit ho,
tum zindagi, tum bandgi,tum raushni tum tazgi,

tum her khushi,tum pyar ho,
tum preet ho, manmeet ho,

ankho'n me tum,yado'n me tum,
sanso'n me tum,aaho'n me tum,
nindo'n me tum...

tumho meri her baat me,tum ho mere dinraat me,
tum subha me, tum sham me,tum soch me, tum kaam me...

mere liye pana bhi tum,mere liye khona bhi tum,
mere liye hansna bhi tum, mere liye rona bhi tum,
aur jagna sona bhi tum...

jaun kahin,dekhoo'n kahi'n,tum ho waha'n, tum ho wahi'n,
kaise batau'n mai tumhe, tum bin to mai kuch bhi nahi...

mere liye tum kaun ho?

yeh jo tumhara roop hai,yeh zindagi ki dhoop hai,
chandan sa tarasha hai badan,beheti hai jis me ek agan...

yeh shokhiya'n, yeh mastiya'n, tumko hawao'n se mili,
tumko ghatao'n se mili,
hotho'n ki kaliya'n khil gai,aankho'n ko jheele'n mil gai,

chehre me simti chandani,aawaz me hai ragni,
shishe ke jaisa ang hai,phoolo'n ke jaisa rang hai,
nadiyo'n ke jaisi chal hai,kya husn hai, kya haal hai...

yeh jism ki ranginiya'n,jaise hazaro'n titliya'n,
bahon ki yeh golaiya'n,aanchal me yeh perchaiya'n,
yeh nagriya hai khwab ki,

kaise batau'n mai tumhe halat dil-e-betaab ki,
kaise bataun mai tumhe, mere dil me tum kaun ho,
kaise bataun, kaise bataun, kaise bataun mai tumhe,

mere liye tum dharam ho,mere liye iman ho,
tumhi ibadat ho meri,tum hi to chahat ho meri,
tum hi mera armaan ho,takta hoon mai her pal jise,
tum hi to woh tasveer ho,tum hi meri taqdeer ho,
tum hi sitara ho mera,tum hi nazara ho mera,
yun dhyan me mere ho tum,jaise mujhe ghere ho tum,
poorab me tum pachim me tum,uttar me tum dakshin me tun,
sare mere jeevan me tum,her pal me tum her chir me tum,
mere liye rasta bhi tum , mere liye manzil bhi tum,
mere liye sagar bhi tum, mere liye sahil bhi tum,
mai dekhta bass tumko hoon,mai sochta sirf tumko hoon,
mai janta bass tum ko hoon,mai manta bass yumko hoon,
tum hi meri pehchan ho, kaise bataun mai tumhe,
devi ho tum mere liye,mere liye bhagwan ho...

kaise bataun mai tumhe mere liye tum kaun ho... kaise?????

zaroorat se kuch jyada hi tarif ki hai, yeh meri rai hai,
kantchant kerne se unke kalaam ki be-adabi hoti isliye...

funnyfaridabadi
5th March 2007, 04:59 PM
Wah aaj to jhoomroo bhai bhi josh mein aa gaya

jhoomroo
5th March 2007, 05:08 PM
bohot achi hai fido, maine nahi padhi thee yeh...

F I D O
5th March 2007, 05:13 PM
jhoomro bhai ishq andha hota hai.....ishq mein mehboob ki laakhon burayiaan nahi dikhti aur uski choti-se-choti baat par muskurane ko dil chahta hai....uski khoobsurati ko kuch aise byaan karne ko ji chahta hai.....use apne jazbaat kuch aise batane ko dil chahta hai.......anyways bahut-2 shukriya keep posting...

F I D O
6th March 2007, 04:54 PM
Written by maestro sung by my favourite Kavita Krishnamurthy from movie "SAAZ"


Kya Tumne Hai Keh Diya
Kya Maine Hai Sun Liya
Tunmhi Kaho Ab Maein Kahun Kya
Kya Tumne...

Jabse Maein Aur Tum Paas Aaye
Raaston Mein Hain Phoolon Ke Saaye
Pedh Jhoome Hawa Gungunaye
Koi Pooche Agar Yeh Kya Hua
To Isko Kahe Koi Kya
Kya Tumne...

Neela Saagar Hai Neeli Ghatayen
Meherbaan Humpe Hain Yeh Fizaayen
Vaadiyaan Baahen Khole Bulayen
Koi Pooche Agar Yeh Kya Hua
To Isko Kahe Koi Kya
Kya Tumne...

(javed akhtar)


and not to forget the musician Zakir Hussain sahib

jhoomroo
19th April 2007, 01:36 PM
aao, aur na socho,soch ke kya paoge,

jitna bhi samjhe ho,utna pachtaye ho,

jitna bhi samjhoge utna pachtaoge,

aao, aur na socho,

tum ehsaas ki jis manzilper ab pahoonche ho,

woh meri dekhibhali hai,........jane bhi do.....

iska kab tak sog manana,

yeh duniya underse kyun itni kali hai.....

aao, kuch jeeneka saman kare'n hum,

sach ke hatho'n humne jo mushkil pai hai,

jhooth ke hatho'n woh mushkil aasan kare'n hum,

tum meri aankho'n me aankhe'n daal ke dekho,

phir mai tumse sari jhoothi kasme'n khaun,

phir tum woh sari jhoothi bate'n dohrao,

jo sab ko achhi lagti hai,..... jaise,

wafa kerne ki bate'n,jeeneki marne ki bate'n,

hum dono yun woqt guzare'n,,

mai tumko kuch khwab dikhaun,

tum mujhko kuch khwab dikhao,

jinki koi tabeer nahi ho,

jitne din yeh mel rahega,

dekho achha khel rahega,......aur,

kabhi dil bher jaye,to keh dena tum,

beet gaya milne ka mausam.....

aao, aur na socho,

soch ke kya paoge.......

jhoomroo
19th April 2007, 02:08 PM
haan, gunahgar hoon mai,

jo saza chahe adalaat de de ,

aapke samne sarkar hoon mai...

mujhko iqraar, ki maine ek din,

kuhdko nilam kiya,aur razi-barja, ............ razi-barja=apni marzise

ser-e-bazar,ser-e-aam kiya,

mujhko qeemat bhi bohot khoob mili thee lekin,

maine saudeme khayanat ker li, yane, ............. khayanat=beimani

kuch khwab bachake rakhe,maine socha tha,

kise fursaat hai,

jo meri ruh, mere dilki talashi lega,

maine socha tha,

kise hogi khaber,

kitna nadan tha mai,

khwab choop sakte hai kya?

raushni muthhi me rooq sakti hai kya?

woh jo hona tha, hua...

apke samne sarkar hoon mai,

jo saza chahe'n adalat de de,

faisla soon ne ko tayar hoon mai,

haan, gunahgar hoon mai...

faisla yeh hai adalatka,

tere sare khwab , aajse tere nahi hai mujrim,

zehen ke sare safar,

aur tere dilki perwaz,

jism me behete lahoo ke nagme,

ruh ka saz,sama-at aawaz, .................. sama-at=soon ne ki shakti

aajse tere nahi hai mujrim,

wasl ki sari hadise'n,

gam-e-hijra'n ki kitab,

teri yado'n ke gulaab,tere ehsaas,

teri fiqr-o-nazar,teri sab sa-ate'n, .............. sa-ate'n=kshan

sab lamhe tere,

roz-o-shab,sham-o-seher,

aajse tere nahi hai mujrim,

yeh to insaf huaa tere kharid daro'n se,

aur ab teri saza,

tujhe marne ki ijazat nahi,

tujhe jeena hoga....