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chichora
15th February 2006, 02:21 PM
dhuan banake fiza mein uda diya mujhko
main jal raha tha kisi ne bujha diya mujhko



khada hoon aaj bhi roti ke chaar hurf liye
[I]sawal yeh hai kitabon ne kya diya mujhko

"roti" (means I am still fighting for food for survival)
The question is what has the books given me]

safaid sung ki chadar lapait kar mujh par
faseel-e-shaher pe kis ne saja diya mujhko

[After adorning me with a sheet of white stone
Who has placed/decorated me on the boundary/wall of the city]

main ek zurra buulanddi ko chhoone nikla tha
hawa ne thum ke zameen par gira diya mujhko


Dictionary : [I]fiza - environment; hurf - words; sung - stone; faseel-e-shaher - boundary of city; zurra - small particle; buulanddi- height

Jupiter
15th February 2006, 02:26 PM
aah.... wonderful poem by Nazeer Baqri

sung by Lata Mangeshkar in album Sajda, composed by Jagjit Singh

God_Of_Death
15th February 2006, 02:39 PM
aah.... wonderful poem by Nazeer Baqri

sung by Lata Mangeshkar in album Sajda, composed by Jagjit Singh


juppi bahi wah wah apne to gazals mei bi PHD ki hai......

maan gaye bahi aap ko...:thumbup: :thumbup: :thumbup:

shades
17th February 2006, 03:00 PM
kamaal hai

aapka nam toh chichora types hai
bt seriously chichoriyo wali koi baat nahi

very much nice shayaris frm ur side

n 1st one is too gud

1. dhuan banake fiza mein uda diya mujhko
main jal raha tha kisi ne bujha diya mujhko

chichora
17th February 2006, 03:30 PM
shukriya Shades bhai.....
bas aap logon ko pasand aaye aise hi sher, ghazal pesh karne ki koshish karoonga....

leleram
17th February 2006, 03:33 PM
shukriya Shades bhai.....
bas aap logon ko pasand aaye aise hi sher, ghazal pesh karne ki koshish karoonga....


:w00t: :w00t:

shades
17th February 2006, 05:52 PM
shukriya Shades bhai.....
bas aap logon ko pasand aaye aise hi sher, ghazal pesh karne ki koshish karoonga....

hey bhai nahi behen bolne ka

Jupiter
17th February 2006, 06:31 PM
hey bhai nahi behen bolne ka




girlllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll sure?:tongue_smilie:

Narad Muni
17th February 2006, 06:38 PM
girlllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll sure?:tongue_smilie:
Chup saale sun legi.
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Bhag jayegi.
:lol: :thumbup: :tongue_smilie:

chichora
17th February 2006, 11:21 PM
arey Shades......tum bhai nahi ho..............
accha in sab ki behan ho........
chalega........

shades
20th February 2006, 09:14 AM
ok agr mujhe galat nahi laga toh yaha ek bhi girl nahi

so sad yaar

God_Of_Death
20th February 2006, 09:30 AM
arey Shades......tum bhai nahi ho..............
accha in sab ki behan ho........
chalega........


Ka baat kar rahe hooo... Raksha bandan ko to abhi bahut time hai yaar, and usually us din me leave pe hota hoon...so :laugh:

God_Of_Death
20th February 2006, 09:36 AM
N bhai chichora a +ve for u
:hi_5: :toast: