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mastraam
28th July 2006, 10:03 PM
Loktantra

This was my first and one of the most acclaimed poems , which was written way back in 2000.

Aap loug bhi mazaa lijiye.......

12 baj chukay thay,
akhbaar kay kaaryalaya mein,
editor sahab pareshaan thay,

thoday hairaan thay,
aakhir is sheher ko huaa kya?
Na koi Quatla,na dakaiti,
na chinaiti,na tod-phod,
na ched-chaad,na balatkaar,
na deh -vyaapaar.
na dharna,na pradarshan,
na hi kisi parti ki raili,
kaisay badli shehri shaili?
achaanak phone ghanghanaaya,
editor saahab ne lapak kar receiver uthaaya,
aawaaz aai-
Call girl ke saath,
rang-reliyan manaate mantri ji giraftaar,
par kiye saare aarope asweekaar,
bolay-
"Bhale yeh ladki jawaan hai,
par meri betee samaan hai,
ise secretart banaanay kay liye bulaaya thaa,
kyonki yeh mahila utthaan ka saal hai,
aur jaane kyun,
pahle hi utthaan par,
itnaa bawaal hai!"
samarthakon ne kahaa-
"ye virodhiyon ki chaal hai,
pakdi gai ladki,
virodhi neta ka hi maal hai!"
Donon guton mein haatha-paiee,
jan-sampatti mein aag lagaai,
baazaar lootaa, goli chalaai,:2guns::boom:
kuch darshak dher,
deh thandi,aatmaa swatantra,
wah re Loktantra!
shaam tak,
editor sahab thak chukay thay,
chehre par santushti,akhbaar mein masaala,
loktantra ki pyaali mein,
apraadhon ki haala,
vichaaron ka "manthan" kar gol,
whishky ki botal khol,
wo dheeray say paday bol-
Kabhi Dhoop Kabhi Chaaya Hai,
Sab Loktantra Ki Maaya Hai!

C0pyright-Ritesh Tripathi urf "Manthan" urf "mastraam":laugh:

GodFather
29th July 2006, 02:13 AM
Ati uttam Ritesh bhai,sarv uttam....maja aa gaya. ek vinti hai, kripya aur pesh kariye.:hi_5:

JUNGLEE RAJA
29th July 2006, 10:51 AM
bahut bahut badhiya mastraam bhai

:award:

Mastikhor
29th July 2006, 12:15 PM
:clap: :clap:

leleram
29th July 2006, 12:53 PM
awesome post mastram :award:

Mahamuni
29th July 2006, 12:56 PM
Ati sundar chitran kiya hai aapne aajkal ke loktantra ka.

Kuch aur aane deejiye.........................hum to sochtey thay ki aap Mastram Lucknawi hein, jo yahan sabka khade karne ke liye aaye hein. Aapney hamein galat saabit kar diya.

desichichora
31st July 2006, 03:37 AM
wah wah ati uttam, kehte hi hai
jahan huve fail sare tantra
bhaiya wahi hai lok tantra

captain
1st August 2006, 12:12 PM
Good One mastraam:toast:

Jupiter
1st August 2006, 02:06 PM
Jiyo Mastram Mirzapuri

ati uttam vicharmanthan hai aapka

us din fone par suni thi tab jyada maja aaya tha, kavi ki awaaz mein uski kavita sunne ka alag maza hai.....

Eshtyle Raja
1st August 2006, 08:30 PM
Wonderful post Mastraam ji... :toast: