Maa

[Jupiter]

This is a poem i wrote for my Ma on her Birthday

She cried reading it just the way i had cried while writing the poem. Even my Dad was into tears on reading this 1.

I bet anyone who loves his/her mother and family is bound to cry on this.

Please post replies and let me know your views on this 1.

I am giving it as a link so that it can be read in Hindi by all...
http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/84/maa8gy.png


Edited By Fundoo ;)

[Don]

Really Nice poem Jupiter.

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/8549/mother7jy.th.jpg

:DUH: (http://img145.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mother7jy.jpg)

[leleram]

a touching poem.... great work jupi:balloon:

[Narad Muni]

Aankhe Num ho gayi yaar:balloon:

[captain]

very very touching poem.... :hi_5: :hi_5:

[fundoo]

really nice jupi

PS : edited b'coz of image view opstion

REgards !!!

[Chilli]

Bahut khoob likha hai !

[Eshtyle Raja]

Great.. very touching :DUH:

[Sunshine]

Very nice !!

you should write more often jupiter

[Mahamuni]

Zindgi Bhi Kaisi Kamaal Hai !!!

Pahley Aansu Aatey Thay
Tab Maa Yaad Aati Thi,

Lekin,

Aaj Maa Yaad Aati Hai,
Tab Aansu Aate Hein

[DreamWeaver]

atee-uttam Mahamuni.. charan-sparsh... :balloon:

[KaamDev]

Great MahaMuni, Gagar me saagar bhar diya aapne to in 4 lines me............Good Going
Fundoozone jindabaad, All fundoos are really sensitive and caring for every special thing even for FT too.:toast: