yehi wafa ka sila hai to koi baat nahi

[chichora]

Hello Friends,
here is another good nazm........i hope you will all like it.

yehi wafa ka sila hai to koi baat nahi
ye dard tumne diya hai to koi baat nahi

yehi bohat hai ke tum dekhte ho saahil se
safina doob raha hai to koi baat nahi

rakha tha aashiyana-e-dil mey chupa kar tumko
woh ghar tumne chhod diya hai to koi baat nahi

tum hi ne aaina-e-dil mera banaya tha
tum hi ne tod diya hai to koi baat nahi

kise majaal kahe koi mujhko dewaana
agar ye tumne kaha hai to koi baat nahi.

[Admin]

Nice one... +ve for u

[Jupiter]

good 1 chichora

but this is a Ghazal n not a Nazm

[chichora]

Thanks Admin and Jupiter bhai for appreciation.......
and Jupiter bhai i have always thought that ghazal and nazm are very much similar........now i have just gone thru their differences........they differ in many ways.........i will make sure such mistakes will not be repeated.....
and thanks to you for pointing it out.

[Jupiter]

Thanks Admin and Jupiter bhai for appreciation.......
and Jupiter bhai i have always thought that ghazal and nazm are very much similar........now i have just gone thru their differences........they differ in many ways.........i will make sure such mistakes will not be repeated.....
and thanks to you for pointing it out.


the pleasure is all mine yaar
actually i myself am into doing shayari
n am a voracious listener of Jagjit Singh
so with time got these intricaicies of urdu poetry