Original Gazal- Apne Hathon se

[BILOO PEHALWAN]

Apne hathoon se muth lagaya nahi kartay
Mere dost! Yun apna paani zaya nahi kartay

Ek baar yun kisi ko l-und de kar apna
C-hut mai uski dal kar bhul jaya nahi kartay

Iss C-hutt ko chatne se bhala kya hoga haasil
sahi c-hudakkar launday waqt zaya nahi kartay


Rakhte hain jo l-und bara sang apni pent main.
Har kisi ki dekh kar woh apna hilaya nahi kartay

Doo chupay laga kar jo nidhaal par jayen
Aisi dheli randio ko l-und dikhaya nahi kartay

(G-andu hazraat tawajja farmyaen)

L-und hi jab deena hai to phir chup ke kya dena
G-andugiri kay dhanday main ghabraya nahi kartay

Qadar kiya karo unn jawanoo ki tum bhi Pehalwan
Khulli c-hut dekh kar bhi jo lalchaya nahi kartay

C-hut kay chakkaro se tum to dour hi rehna Pehalwan
Jo par jatay hain is main, who baaz aya nahi kartay


BP
13/11/2007

[Mastikhor]

:adore: :adore:

Bahut khoob ... :thumbup1:

Jupi ke original compositions ko badhiya competition mil rahi hai ;)

[BILOO PEHALWAN]

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Jupi ke original compositions ko badhiya competition mil rahi hai ;)

shukriya bhai jaan, aap jaise kadardano ki wajah se yeh sambhav ho pa raha hai

[leleram]

:roar::roar::roar:

too good:thumbup::thumbup:

[Jupiter]

jupi ne isliye original compositions aajkal post karna band kar diye

[DreamWeaver]

:roar: :roar: :roar: :roar:

Pehelwan ne likhi original gazal apne haath se,
aisi composition ko tc se bahar rakha nahi karte... :)

[dengu]

:3:gud hai pelwan ji,,,,:3:

[Yeda Anna]

:rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

Jai ho :bow:

[Mahamuni]

jai ho, jai ho, pehalwan shayar ki jai ho

[aaichaagho]

:adore::adore:

[airINDIA]

:adore: :rofl: :adore:

Bhramchari kahte hai khud ko hamare pahelwaan; hamesha Hanumaan ka naam lete
Ajeeb hai lekin - vo L-und, Ch00t, aur Randiyo ke siva aur koi baat hi nahi kartey

[lampat]

murakh... itna bhi nahi samajhta ki pahalwan BAL (filmo) ka BRAHAMCHARI hai :tongue:

[boyricky41]

:roar: :roar: :roar: :roar:

Pehelwan ne likhi original gazal apne haath se,
aisi composition ko tc se bahar rakha nahi karte... :)

Dhakkan peeche hata kar yoon,
Kalam itne Motee use nahin kiya karte...
Ink ka colour kaise choose karein.......
Ink ka colour kaise choose karein,
Neeche Do Inkpot se jo nikle,
wohi nishaan chhod hain jaate